Hi, Mark
Isend you my message to tell you about my experienc In searching for my required book. My book is in the field of phonlogy and phonetics. It talks about the the system patterns In English language. Being specialist in phonlogy and i need to do researches in this regard i chose book about acoustic sounds to have look about it . Yesterday we went together students and tutors to learn how to use library when you research for some book or reference . My speciality was on fifth floor of Albert Sloman library at Essex university. It was best place as Mark told me. I used lift to reach the fifth floor in which all references of linguistics and phonetics are available. Ireached there and started to research for my chosen book. But all my attempt was useless. After ifelt that ilost the the hope to find the book ,I asked one of the library workers who searched with me ,in vain. After that the librarian told me after he checked on computer that the book i research for is not available. Iasked him What should ido in this case ,you can pass here next week to check again if it is available or ask for the book from other libraries. finally , i thanked the man , and i returned to find both Sandra and Mark waiting for the student to if the sutdent did well or not , and i told them about what happend . Mark promised to accompany when the tests of the university over . Thank you Mark ,Thank you Sandra for your help the student and this my brief about my trip to library last week.
any feedback or advice are welcome
Hello Sultan. I think that before analysing your writing at sentence level, it would be good to talk about some issues of structure and organisation together. I can follow your narrative here, but there are one or two things that you could do to make your writing clearer for your reader(s). Let's talk in person because I'd like to recommend a process which is easily to explain as a demonstration.
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